Monday 17 June 2013

Volcano Writing

The river went racing down like hot bubbling lava rivers.  The lava was exploding like a jet in the sky.  Boom!  Zoom!  Pop! By Lennox.
The lava went zooming down the hill like a snake speeding down a tree.  The lava went crackle, crackle, crackle!  By Lincoln.
The volcano went boom!  It was twirling slowly in the air.  The lava went over the sides.
By Lydia.
The lava went everywhere.  Peum!  The lava went like a shooting star.  The smoke went twirling up and down in the sky.  By Rylie.
The sky looked like flaming fire.  The lava was flooding all over the world.  The lava looked like a black seal rolling down the volcano!  By Ruby.

It went splat all over the place.  Lava leaked down the voclano.  By Matthew.
All of the rocks came tumbling down the voclano.  The lava came down the volcano. 
By Caleb K.
It went kaboom.  It was messy because it exploded.  Boom!  It was exploding on the mountains.  I saw a rock flying in the sky.  When I saw inside the voclano,
it was amazing.  I was shocked.  By Jaxson.
It went kaboom like a rocket.  The lava went racing down the volcano.  It was cool. 
By Kaleb.
It went kaboom.  It went like a rocket up in the sky.  The smoke flew in the air. 
The lava went crackety pop.  By Trisan.

3 comments:

  1. I hope you enjoy learning about Volcanoes Room 1. Your buddy class room 4 will be beginning to learn about Earthquakes and Volcanoes starting next week. We might be able to share our learning with you.

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  2. I love this writing it is so much fun to read. One thing that I really love is the onomatapaia`s!

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  3. I like your story Jaxson.

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