Wednesday, 12 June 2013

Explosive Writing

 
It exploded everywhere.  Boom!  By Chavelle.
 The lid was smoking in the bottle.  By Caleb K.
It went up in the sky like a bomb.  It went spat!  Spat!  Spat!  I did a little laugh because it exploded.  By Annabel.
 It went kaboom!  The water went pop, pop, pop, pop!  By Tristan.
Kerplonk!  It went on Mrs Christiansen.  Boom like a bomb.  It went booming like rocks going down a mountain.  By Jaxson.

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